Powered by Bravenet Bravenet Blog

Tag Board

corina: Way to Go!!! I'm really happy for you! What instrument do you play anyway?
Kathleen: Aww... I'm sorry that your trip was cancelled, huge bummer!!!! *hugs* I hope that you will get to go again next year, thanx for stopping by! It's been WAAAAAYYY too long! LOL! Have a great day...
Kathleen: Hey, long time no type! Tell me about your trip! Stop by my journal some time...
bravezila: hi im tagboating today...lots of cool blogs to surf .....a
Dugger: Gir is awesome!
Rozie ZE Fish: YO! Megan!!!! it's been a coon's age! *faints* how've you been? hope you're doing well... love you!
Kathleen: MEGAN!!! It's been forever!!!! you need to update! Check out my journal, i finally posted a new entry ... hope you're doing well!
Corina: WOW! Long time since you updated! Hope you're doing well!
Amanda: Hi! Hope you are having a great day!!
Erika: Sure, I would definatly love to be journal buddies with you. I'm adding you right now :D
eric: Nice journal, have a great week!
Tina: Just stopping by. You tagged me and thought I would return the favor. I hope you had a great day!
mc: yay! people post me now!L:)
Erika: Hi! I found your journal through a friend and it's mucho cute. God Bless!
Kathleen: Hi! I'm home! finally back from Spokane and from camp... and I FINALLY updated my journal if you'd like to check it out .
Rosy: Hey MC, how've ya been? Hope you have a fantabulous day!
Kathleen: Hey I signed your guestmap.. I updated my journal today if you'd like to read it. I'll be going away for awhile, a lot has just happened and I'm really hurting, so I need to get away . Thanx for all your prayers...
mc: come and post on my guest map if ya want:)
mc: thats a good idea. ill do that. maybe ill get one of my own.
Kathleen: Come sign my guestmap!!
Kathleen: I like!!
mc: you guys like?
rozie: ya gotta see how i changed me layout! I love you... i hate having down mood swings... I know God'll pick ya back up again tho'- he always does, eh? Keep cool MC...
Kathleen: OH MY GOODNESS!! I just noticed that you like Avril Lavigne- I love her!! I spent all weekend listening to her CDs (which I borrowed from the library since I'm too cheap to buy them ) I love her music so much!! Oh, by the way I'm back from my wonderful trip, come check out my journal!
Kathleen: Hey mc, wazzup??
mc: sure thing angeldust!:D
♥Angeldust♥: Hi Megan, I started a story about a 16 yr old girl named Zoyie. The idea is for everyone to add to the story and see how this girls life turns out! So add your part if you want. (((Hugs)))
Kathleen: Hello, thanks for the tag! I left you a comment...
mc: hullo all! toady iam going to wild adventures! i cant wait! i hadnt been in years. mega fun. cya when i get back!:D
♥Angeldust♥: Hi Megan! Glad your having a good day! I hope tomorrow is just as good! (((Hugs)))
sara: how r u :)
Rozie : Much love to u! I am copy-pasting all of these words... I still can't type.
mc: uh. yea. leslie i dont even know who u r...do you have the wrong journal. ive never been to a lesbian meeting. i have a BF...so yea.but its ok.
♥Angeldust♥: Hi Megan, Just wanted to drop in and say hello! Hope your having a Great Weekend! (((Hugs)))
redglory: Hi. Just checking out some of the neighborhood. Like your journal. It's cool!
rozie: hey mc, suppeth? kewl pics! must've been fun, eh? How're things w/ ur BF? what's his name? well grl, keep ur eyes on Jesus. [WideEyes]
mc: no! the pics are not showing any more! sorry guys...
mc: iam boared. i need stuff to do. ::grr::
Kathleen: Hello again, how's it going? You're playing HOOKEY??? Ha ha ha . I'm glad you got to skip out on school! Have a great day...
rozie: Hey Mc, suppeth? I like your music in the backround, it has me dancing. sh-yah!
Rev. Handy: Just stopping by to say hello and to say great site... It is worth the visit time and timea again... God Bless!!!
Kathleen: I love the Beach Boys!! LOL, usually any journals that have music playing won't work for us (stupid computer), but yours is working just fine . I can't wait for summer!!!!!!!
Angeldust: Hi Megan! Love the new look!!! Have a Great Day!
mc: i lurve the beach boys. they rock!!!
westie: hi just passing through so i thought i would leave a tag
mc: thanks wendy:)
Wendy: Enjoy your prom!
mc: ::squeels:: I love the new look. dont you guys?
Joan: Hi Megan! Just wanted to say hi!!!! Hope ur having a good weekend! I left you a note under Tuesday;s post~ (((Hugs)))
Syd: allo

Please type in the four characters shown in the black box.

Monday, August 1st 2005

8:44 PM

story

Time period: 1920

The mafia.

Possible romance

Main characters:

Megan (ritzy up town girl)

Gabriel (works at the towns bakery)

“ Gabe, hurry on up and unload the new shipment. Iam not paying you to lolly gag around so hurry up.” A plump little man yelled down to the cellar while rubbing down the tables in the bakery, business was slow since he only just opened and hour ago. The mans features were very ironic, he had green soft eyes, red rosy cheeks and rosy lips; but he didn’t even act like the jolly man the children know. The kids would sometimes come and point at the Santa look alike and giggle with joy. But when this man was on the clock he was very hard to please. A boy trudged up the creaking old wood stairs of the bakery and gave a big sigh before he went out into the cool autumn air to unload pounds of flour and sugar and sometimes butter cream candies and random hard candies for the walk by customers. This boy seemed to be around age 11 with red coarse hair and red freckles played around his nose and cheeks. His eyes were this brilliant shade of blue near the cornea of his eyes and green gently but subtly blended into the blue. He was also wearing a brown worn over alls and a white dirty shirt. His arms were strong from years of hard labor but still very pail. His father had always kept him working from a very young age. He never sees his dad anymore, he was sent to prison one night late summer 2 years ago. His mother refused to tell him what his fathers crime was; she seemed very distraught, she had never been the same since. All she would say is how brave he was. He learned never to ask to many questions and to also never give answers to anyone. You let something slip in this hard shell of a town called buffalo your neck might be slit that nite and could be laying in a puddle of your own blood. New York was definatly not a safe place even in the most ritziest of places. Immigrants came in and got shipped out from Coney island every other day. His family was successful in becoming US citizens. They came over when his mother was still pregnant with him. For 11 years they had been living in a shack on the edge of town. It had one bed room big enough for a normal sized mattress. Sheets and home made blankets scattered on the floor along with dirty brown pillows and worn filthy clothing. There was also a small kitchen. Cracks went up the semi flower wall papered walls and mold was to be found behind the fridge and the annoying thud of water hitting the bottom of the sink every nite. Ever since his father was sent to prison his mother let the kitchen go and stopped washing dishes to where the sink was over flowing with them and the counters had developed mountains of cups and plates. We also had a tiny living room consisting of a fireplace and a record player in the corner next to the maroon tattered chair his father use to sit in when he wasn’t at his important job meetings. My place was in front of the fire place. His mother would lay down a couple of blankets and a small pillow so the hard freezing wood floor would not bother him as much but the kettling fire would give him enough warmth so he could fall asleep. In the morning he would be covered in soot already. It would look like he had come back form the mines that nite. The person who looks out for me now is Mr. Mc Clain who runs the Bakery. He offered a job at the bakery to me 3 years ago one after noon when he seen me working at my old job at the docks on the east side of town. He said it was to dangerous for a boy my age. So ever since he had been working under his wing.

*~*~**~*~**~*~**~*~**~*~*

Great, he is calling me up already. I guess the supply holder finally got here on time. I listed down the last couple of items on the inventory list to see what we had left after a busy week in the shop. Our bakery was the best around, we were famous for our fresh bread and our jelly filled pastries. You could smell the bakeries aroma fly out of the chimney and imagine it almost looking as if it fluttered out of here like a butterfly leading unsuspecting victims back to our humble shop. I had to drag my feet up the stairs I was so tiered from last nite. The 3 cats were fighting in the ally once again. It was just one of the many things that kept me up every nite. I quietly got up not to disturb my mother and tip toed to the door. I was reaching for the rusted handle but it sounds like someone else got the obnoxious cats before I could get to them . I heard a loud crack let out once then again . The nite went silent except for the chanting of a drop of water hitting a pot in the sink. Those were the usual nites at the end of my town. So I trudge up the old rickety wooden stairs and headed to the back door. I gently open the door as not to make any sound on my way out. The supply truck was a couple yards away, of course, what else could make my day better. I untied my black tattered apron and set it on a hook out right next to the door. I jumped down from the highest step and bent down to find a suitable rock to keep the door open so I could trudge loads of sugar up the back stairs and down the cellar stairs. Whoa, I slowly raised myself and pressed my body flat against the wall. I heard two bodies scuttle and knock over our trash cans. I kept deadly still if not I would be dead. In New York you never wanted to be caught in a brawl. “Ok bub, where is my money you promised me? Huh?” I tightened my fist some more to keep myself calm and quiet. “You thought you could run didn’t Ya, you’ve been running all nite; I can tell you have. Thought you could get away with Al Capone’s men around every corner?” I heard a click and a man whimper under this other mans power. “Now where is the money?” I heard the other man mumble a couple of words then 4 loud bangs from a gun. I heard a dead weight of a man drop to the ground and the other man fleeing into the woods behind the bakery. I tried to stay hidden but he caught me from the corner of his eye and turned around and pointed the gun right at my chest. I heard a voice call from the woods behind him. ”Stop! That’s our old boys son, leave him be!” He gave me a wink and a smile before he disappeared into the darkness of the woods. I was confused and mortified at all of this.

0 Wave's.

There are no comments to this entry.

Post New Comment

 BraveJournal Member Non-Member
No Smilies More Smilies »
Please type the letters you see